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Nightmare Noon - Part 1

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This is part one of four.
Part 1 | Part 2| Part 3| Part 4

Go vote in my poll as to which of my costumes is your favorite! [link]
.PSD available if you wish to do a translation of this comic! [link]

CREDITS CONTAIN SPOILERS
Just go to the next part ;)

Oh my goodness. Oh my goodness. Oh my goodness. It's finally done. Happy Halloween everyone! I had to split this into separate parts because it exceeded the filesize limit. O.o

These credits are for the series as a whole.

Method: Pencil & Paper, Inkscape, Photoshop CS5.

Vectors I created for this:
Flutterbunny (4)
Doctor Frankenpony's Monster (6)
Pinkie Girpie (6)
Ninja Dash (12)
Raritymallow (3)
Twibook Sparkle (2)
All background vectors excluding "Fluttershy's Cottage" by iOVERD [link] and "Far Off Billboarded Trees" by Swivel-Zimber [link] are original by me.

Vectors I modified:

"Rarity - Angry Walk" by Delphince: [link]
"Rarity Yell" by OhItIsOn: [link]
"Rarity - Elegance" by Quanno3: [link]
"Rarity is not amused" by Dharthez: [link]
"Rarity, Snooty Mode Activated" by Kittita: [link]
"Rarity - It Is On!" by TheFlutterKnight: [link]
"-RarityScream-" by DraikJack: [link]
"Rarity - It is on!" by TheFlutterKnight: [link]
"My Little Vector - Rarity" by Rudahn: [link]
"Rarity - Why you!" by Santafer: [link]
"Rarity's Roots" PsychoanalyticalBrony: [link]
"Rarity - Oh No You Didn't" by BlindCaveSalamander: [link]
"Excited Rarity" by nickman983: [link]
"Rarity getting rejected" by RedPandaPony: [link]
"Part 3 - Rarity" by Ambassad0r: [link]
"Eh… Wat?" by Sarcoptess: [link]
"Twilight Unimpressed" by Geogo999: [link]
"Poo Dance Floor - Twilight Pleased" by Koprchris: [link]
"Sad Twilight is Sad" by Cthulhuandyou: [link]
"Twilight Sparkle Vector" by Craftybrony: [link]
"Rainbow Dash - Surprised" by Hawk9mm: [link]
"Rainbow Dash - Everypony loves me" by Austiniousi: [link]
"Rainbow Dash Vector - Um, Sorry…" by Anxet: [link]

:iconfyre-flye::iconhasbroplz::iconsaysplz: My Little Pony and all characters involved are copyright Hasbro & Lauren Faust.

Fonts used are Suplexmentary Comic NC & BDCartoonShout.
Created with Inkscape and Photoshop.

If I failed to credit anyone properly please tell me so that I can add them to the credits.
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MyLittlePrimo's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This is the first time I've ever written a Critique, but here goes nothing:
This comic isn't half bad! If there are any problems with this, there is one I can't help but notice: although Rainbow Dash baring her teeth in the 5th & 6th panels is a coherent expression, the teeth are being shown distinctly; isn't her mouth being covered by her mask?
Other than that, though, your dialogue, consistencies, structure and twist give this the makings of the next TV show episode. I just love how they're trying to get Fluttershy to join them, but then as Rarity warns her to make good on her promise, Rainbow Dash scoffs at the marshmallow costume she was subjected to wear, and they're off! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x…" width="15" height="15" alt=":XD:" title="XD"/>
I only wish more episodes of the actual Ponies TV Show could be this funny.
Oh, and nice job modifying the vectors. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t…" width="15" height="15" alt=":thumbsup:" title="Thumbs Up"/>
Keep up the good work.