It's been slow at work lately. Got this done in two days. (Don't tell my boss. XD)
More time travelling Twilight!
What is the book about?
I'll let you all (unofficially) decide in the comments. Oh I apologize for anyone who just died of a cute overload. ^-^ EDIT: Tweaked a few panels.
More time travelling Twilight comics:
Vectors I made for this: "Lady Bugs Awake" [link] "Filly Sprint" [link] "Step Back, I'm Trying Magic" [link]
Vectors I modified: "Contented Rarity" by Stabzor: [link] "Twilight Sparkle is annoyed" by LilCinnamon: [link] "Twilight Sparkle Suspicious" by Tim015: [link] "Rarity getting rejected" by RedPandaPony: [link] "Twilight Sparkle Frustrated" by areysram: [link] "Rarity's Epic Facehoof" by ABadCookie: [link] "Peekaboo" by coldbologna: [link] "Screw Studying" by BonesWolbach: [link] "Twilight ninja is scouting you" by Vunlinur: [link] "Twilight Sparkle - She does like books!" by Santafer: [link] "Filly Twilight Sparkle" by Silentmatten: [link] "Twilight's Library (night)" by Sulyo: [link] "Ponies Fly By Background" by adcoon: [link]
My Little Pony and all characters involved are copyright Hasbro.
Fonts used are Suplexmentary Comic NC & BDCartoonShout. Created with Inkscape and Photoshop.
If I failed to credit anyone properly please tell me so that I can add them to the credits.
I gotta say this was amazing but really what threw me off is it didn't explain itself very well but overall very good... Yea I rate things pretty high because Im nice that way but I am being honest too. The big problem is what led to this? Was this because of after the mountain side monologue? Or was this entirely different? This just leaves me with lot's and lot's of questions. But here's the problem of doing that in time traveling, It can literally change how the show goes.
Sincerly, Jeffrey Holmes (Devifan2) P.S. Keep up the good work!
I knew you had some good comic talent in you, but there are still some things I would like to say about this comic. To begin with, once again you didn't have spectacular shading (I guess that wasn't your fault), BUT you never drew attention to it by having large detailed scenes. The difference in individual frame size was a nice variation, made he whole thing much more pleasant, the same goes for the shifts in calligraphy and such. One thing that I didn't like about this is that little twi was just in the middle of a field, and I know that this happens plenty of times in the actual show, but you had a choice of where you were going to put her and it was a place with no time reference or points of interest at all. It's not essential to the cartoon but it is what it is. I do like how you used other pre-made sprites and backgrounds, it does improve the quality of the work and a little collaboration never hurt anybody. I'm excited to see where you go with this one. Best of luck.
This is just like that episode of Gargoyles where Xanatos goes back in time to send himself the coin which jumpstarted his entire empire. Nice analogy!
Object paradox; she should be giving her past self a COPY of the book, not the book itself (the copy purchased from a store so as not to create an Information Paradox)
Sincerly,
Jeffrey Holmes (Devifan2)
P.S. Keep up the good work!
-Michael
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