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Dawn by Foxy-Noxy Dawn by Foxy-Noxy
:iconmlptrixieplz::iconsaysplz:You have three days, Sparkle. [link]


All art is mine except for the background vectors that I modified:
"Starry Night" by SilverVectors: [link]
"A View of Ponyville" by hellswolfeh: [link]
"Ponyville Road View" by BonesWolbach: [link]

:iconfyre-flye::iconhasbroplz::iconsaysplz: My Little Pony and all characters involved are copyright Hasbro & Lauren Faust.
:iconmajorasmaskplz::icontriforceplz::iconsaysplz: Except for Majora's Mask, which belongs to Nintendo and it's respective owners.

Fonts used are Suplexmentary Comic NC & BDCartoonShout.
Created with Inkscape and Photoshop.
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Overall, a good use of vectors, and good build up to the punchline. It is very simple in its presentation, but that simplicity is what adds a great deal of impact to the emotion of the comic.

It does play on Trixie's revenge, which is a step away from what I have perceived as the "typical" view of Trixie's character development. Instead of playing into the "Trixie is repentant now," you reached deeper within a very straight-forward concept: revenge.

You do break from her typical third-person speech pattern in pane two, though I am unsure if this is accidental, or playing on Trixie's use of first-person perspective towards the end of the episode. However, such a break from character makes it sound more... sinister, if that was your intent.

You may wish to add reflections in the ponies' eyes in the first pane, as they look like black holes rather than actual pupils.

On a final note, the three pane build up to the reveal at the end is masterfully executed.
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Ponyville, you're all fucked
:iconprincesslunaplz: What are thou doing with my moon??!!
Pretty nice comic, excelent idea with that reference and to me, it didn't seem logical for Trixie to apologize, so i like it.
Vision: It would seem kinda stupid that Trixie is now a good person, so extra point for that revenge thingy
Originality: I could have never though of it, and i think i have never seen any Majoras Mask thing that doesn't involve Luna or Celestia. Pretty imaginative.
Technique: Though i don't like the faces in the first panel, you designed the rest of the comic pretty well
Impact: Pretty "impactive" xD
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:iconalexwarlorn:
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
Twilight, "Except this isn't you Trixie. You were never fool enough to make yourself a slave TWICE." 
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:iconcomiclover25:
ComicLover25 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
You have chosen a teraball fate
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:iconcomiclover25:
ComicLover25 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
Twily
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:iconkrashface:
Krashface Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
...... BEN, were are you?
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:iconvvolfeh:
vvolfeh Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Student Artist
MAJARAS MASK, IS IT HAUNTED? AAAAAAH
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RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013
its always been haunted/cursed though, the majora's mask is said to be the embodiment of a lost tribe's hexing rituals until the tribe in question realized how dangerous the mask was and hoped to seal it away to that it would never be misused by unworthy hands seeking power and destruction over the world. or at least that's one of the myths of the Mask...
the other myth is that it was carved by a traveler who came back a wish granting beast that had been injured so the traveler decided to help the beast and stay with it until its passing, at the beast's death the traveler decided to use the remains to create a mask to remember the creature and hopefully pass its wishing abilities through the new creation he crafted. now the rumor around the net is that the ancient tribe descended from this traveler and used the mask for the above purposes without knowing what the object had been made of or what its already magical properties were.
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:iconthe-silver-brony:
The-SiLvER-Brony Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013
Really well-made backgrounds and awesome reference! You deserve a fave!
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:iconauthorjack:
authorjack Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Student General Artist
*Gasps* I remember that game! :) Nice comic!
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:iconcatperson100:
catperson100 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:(
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:iconxenosplicer117:
xenosplicer117 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
Isn't there a fic that uses the last panel as a cover
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:iconfoxy-noxy:
Foxy-Noxy Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
There shouldn't be, as I made it and I haven't authorized use of it elsewhere. If you find it, could you link me to it?
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:iconxenosplicer117:
xenosplicer117 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013
this [link]
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:iconitsover9000ish:
ITSOVER9000ish Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
OMC! The Marejora's Mask!
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:iconfoxy-noxy:
Foxy-Noxy Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
DAT PUN. OH GOD DAT PUN. XD
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:iconcommanderex:
CommanderEX Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
I am sure Luna will protect her friend, after all Twilight not only saved her but also was her first friend, no way Luna will let Trixie use her Moon to kill her best if only true friend.
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:iconkonics:
konics Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
oh god
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:iconssbrosb:
SSBrosB Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
I'm scared to know if the moon has a face or not. O.o
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:iconjjkgamer:
jjkgamer Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
So awesome!!!!!!! My fav Zelda game of all time
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Moonlight-Pen Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice recolor
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:iconlordsiravant:
lordsiravant Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Heh...hehehe. Hehehehaha! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! :evillaugh:
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:icongamma102:
gamma102 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013
*slaps you*
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:iconlordsiravant:
lordsiravant Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*breaks your face*
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:icongamma102:
gamma102 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013
AAARGH!

*Breaks your too*

... Well, s*yay*t. I hope I have insureance...
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crazyseandx Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
Otherwise(sorry for double comment), good thinking on using the idea of this sort of thing going.
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crazyseandx Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
Flaw #1) After using Majora's Mask Skull Kid was incredibly remorseful...at least, in my eyes.

Flaw #2) I think Miyamoto would..well...take it, Mr. Michael Scott.
:iconofficenoplz: Oh GOD NO!! NO!! NOOO!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
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:iconcaracitrine:
CaraCitrine Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I did not expect this. BEAUTIFUL. FANTASTIC. WONDERFUL. YOU ARE GRAND.
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:iconjdts7:
jdts7 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
PINKIE! we need you to play random instruments again!
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:iconsonic500:
sonic500 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
Whelp, there fucked.
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:icontopofthemornintoye:
topofthemornintoye Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
"Twilight Equips Fierce Deity Mask" Awwww shits about go down.
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:iconstandardbronybrowser:
Luna will not be happy.
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:iconmkbrony:
MKBrony Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
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:iconinsaneblogger:
InsaneBlogger Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
Wait a minute, if the moon's falling... WHAT HAPPENED TO LUNA?!??!??!!!

(Wonderful comic, loved the reference)
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:iconincredinic:
Incredinic Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
This was freaking awesome.
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:iconcristazio:
Cristazio Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What about Luna? lol
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:iconkawa11kun:
kawa11kun Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
It would be awesome if last panel were a wallpaper...
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:iconkawa11kun:
kawa11kun Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
it would be awesome if last panel were a wallpaper
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:iconmetapsionic:
metapsionic Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Creepy! :-)
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:iconpjthebrony:
PJtheBrony Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Photographer
Oh god why...
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:iconrphb:
rphb Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Okay that is one ugly mask, but I don't get the reference, is it supposed to be more powerful then the alicorn amulet, that seems unlikely
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Foxy-Noxy Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It's from a Legend of Zelda game. If they were in the same universe the Alicorn Amulet would be like a parasprite whereas Majora's Mask would be like Discord.
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rphb Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Discord would just snap his fingers and turn that mask into confetti. from a little internet surfing it seems to me that the mask are at most, and properly somewhat below Nightmare Moon in treat level.
Discord on the other hand is way way up there, he only used a small faction of his power against the main six, and the only reason they were able to defeat him was because he underestimated them. He could have destroyed them at any time, but he just wanted to play with them.
Nightmare Moon on the other hand used everything she had against them and didn't hold back.
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Ophiel004 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh hohoho.. You REALLY don't know what you are talking about if you actually believe Discord stands a chance againist that..
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rphb Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
I don't think you know what you are talking about, Discord is just about the most powerful fictional entity ever. He could take out Superman and all the justice league just by snapping his finger for instance.

He is quite literal the primordial god of chaos.
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topofthemornintoye Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
Couldn't take down a bunch of ponies.
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rphb Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
He underestemated them and the elements, and seriously wouln't you if you were him. If he wanted to he could have just killed them outright or turned them into an assortment of cheeses. He played with them as a cat plays with a mouse because he thought it was funny and he never thought he was in any real danger.

Discord is whit is chaos powers properly the most powerful fictional entity that have ever existed. I don't think there are any supervillain in any comic book more powerful then him.
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NuclearMuffinCookie Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Humiliating Trixie?

You shouldn't have done that.
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Gray--Day Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome, Foxy. :D And man, have things ever turned serious. Trixie seems to be like monster waves in tower defense games now - she'll come back every time you beat her and every time she'll be stronger until it's game over. =P
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:iconbrightshadow72:
Brightshadow72 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
This deserves a freaking fanfic. I liked Trixie better when she was 'great and Powerful'. she doesn't seem like the apologizing type....
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SorceressJacklyn Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
"You shouldn't have done that, Sparkle..."
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:iconggod:
GGod Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
And then Luna found out someone was stealing her moon.
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