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Dawn by Foxy-Noxy Dawn by Foxy-Noxy
:iconmlptrixieplz::iconsaysplz:You have three days, Sparkle. [link]

All art is mine except for the background vectors that I modified:
"Starry Night" by SilverVectors: [link]
"A View of Ponyville" by hellswolfeh: [link]
"Ponyville Road View" by BonesWolbach: [link]

:iconfyre-flye::iconhasbroplz::iconsaysplz: My Little Pony and all characters involved are copyright Hasbro & Lauren Faust.
:iconmajorasmaskplz::icontriforceplz::iconsaysplz: Except for Majora's Mask, which belongs to Nintendo and it's respective owners.

Fonts used are Suplexmentary Comic NC & BDCartoonShout.
Created with Inkscape and Photoshop.
Overall, a good use of vectors, and good build up to the punchline. It is very simple in its presentation, but that simplicity is what adds a great deal of impact to the emotion of the comic.

It does play on Trixie's revenge, which is a step away from what I have perceived as the "typical" view of Trixie's character development. Instead of playing into the "Trixie is repentant now," you reached deeper within a very straight-forward concept: revenge.

You do break from her typical third-person speech pattern in pane two, though I am unsure if this is accidental, or playing on Trixie's use of first-person perspective towards the end of the episode. However, such a break from character makes it sound more... sinister, if that was your intent.

You may wish to add reflections in the ponies' eyes in the first pane, as they look like black holes rather than actual pupils.

On a final note, the three pane build up to the reveal at the end is masterfully executed.
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Ponyville, you're all fucked
:iconprincesslunaplz: What are thou doing with my moon??!!
Pretty nice comic, excelent idea with that reference and to me, it didn't seem logical for Trixie to apologize, so i like it.
Vision: It would seem kinda stupid that Trixie is now a good person, so extra point for that revenge thingy
Originality: I could have never though of it, and i think i have never seen any Majoras Mask thing that doesn't involve Luna or Celestia. Pretty imaginative.
Technique: Though i don't like the faces in the first panel, you designed the rest of the comic pretty well
Impact: Pretty "impactive" xD
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December 2, 2012
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