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Autumnshy by Foxy-Noxy Autumnshy by Foxy-Noxy
Ahhhh, fall is here! Brisk air, pretty leaves, pumpkin pies and candy corn. What a lovely season, isn't it? This is a new record for a comic for me. Sure, there isn't any original vector work (a lot of recoloring, though), but still, I got this done in a little over four hours! I hope this is clear enough that it is an extension on the Fluttershy being tree joke.

If not, well, this is an extension of the Fluttershy being a tree joke.

:iconfluttershyplz::iconsaysplz:I would like to be a tree!
:iconfoxy-noxy::iconsaysplz:If you say so, Fluttershy...

Vectors I modified:
"Comic Background #1 - Hurricane Fluttershy" by anbolanos91: [link]
"WTW Leaves" by Swivel-Zimber: [link]
"Cloud Vector" by Flutterbr0: [link]
"I'm trying to be more assertive - SVG -" by 404complaint: [link]
"Rarity Worried" by OTfor2: [link]
"Sad Fluttershy" by Midnite99:[link]
"Berrypunch - Sneaky" by extreme-sonic: [link]
"Lyra Jumping Happily" by MrLolcats17: [link]
"Roseluck - Happy" by CptOfTheFriendship: [link]
"Twilight Sparkle" by MoongazePonies: [link]
"Who, Me?" by MoongazePonies: [link]
"Rarity - Not Sure If Fabulous" by Flizzick: [link]
"Fluttershy Needs a Hug" by ABadCookie: [link]
"Fabulous Confusion" by Orschmann: [link]
"Rarity 3" by Mihaaaa:[link]
"lol Wut?" by Aryvr: [link]
"Excited Rarity" by Nickman983:[link]
"Fluttershy being Fluttershy" by Mindnomad:[link]
"Fluttershy Cannot Unhear..." by Flutterguy317: [link]
"Hesitant Fluttershy" by bengo538: [link]
"Rainbow Running" by PeachSpices: [link]
"Running AJ" by Fluttershy7: [link]

:iconfyre-flye::iconhasbroplz::iconsaysplz: My Little Pony and all characters involved are copyright Hasbro & Lauren Faust.

Fonts used are Suplexmentary Comic NC & BDCartoonShout.
Created with Inkscape and Photoshop.

If I failed to credit anyone properly please tell me so that I can add them to the credits.
:iconphilyphil96:
I want to point out first that I really like the emulation of emotion in every panel. I can tell from each panel the feelings of each character without the text. I also liked some of the affects in the 3rd and 4th panel that give the scene more feeling and a sense of depth, like I could see the entire scene unfold like an actual scene in the show.

However; the last panel came out a bit awkwardly, like you tried to jam too many things into it to quickly get it done. The last panel could of been split into two to solve this.

On another note: I think the characterization was done for Fluttershy quite well. I have read several fan-fictions and read hundreds of comics depicting Flutters as being afraid of people and overly awkward around her friends, when really she's just awkward around strangers and soft spoken in general. Though your's isn't the best example, I feel making a good Fluttershy is more in what you don't make her do than what she does.

Finally: I didn't get the whole tree joke until I read the description, but that probably was just me missing the obvious.

But seriously: I feel I should have lowered the impact score to even less because of the bad taste I was left with. But my surprise that her hair fell out did save it.

This critique was meant to compare yours to true excellence, which it deserves to be, so don't take the low-ish scores too seriously.
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this is really cool,silly,& awesome.it's also funny in a way. i love how you made fluttershy look, but one problem. The tail bone!! when autumnshy blew out her hair, i did not see the tail bone.this art looks just like the art in the show,(and im not surprised if you copied it from the show!) but still, i can still like it. this is a wonderful comic,and i even added it to my fav! :+fav: i love this. i love the way you made the color of her hair,so i aggried with rarity!! and, im just saying, this is an awesome comic. :iconrarityplz:
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