First and foremost; It's a good and lovable pun, but not exactly a hilarious one, in my own opinion, to say the least (I'm usually not good at getting puns, to be honest), but I must admire your originality and creative use of font, and adding focus blur on the foreground and background really gave some depth on the respective panels. It's nifty, but as cautionary advise: try not to overuse it.
The shades on Twilight look awesome, I must say, though it may appear more spot-on if they weren't simply copied off from some clip-art library and then simply plastered onto their faces, which is noticeable on the last panel. But it's still nice. Really nice.
The shades on Twilight look awesome, I must say, though it may appear more spot-on if they weren't simply copied off from some clip-art library and then simply plastered onto their faces, which is noticeable on the last panel. But it's still nice. Really nice.
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